Even though you've written the next chapter already, I AM BEGGING YOU NOT TO BRING HUSSEIN BACK. PLEASE.
Also, I thought it was kind of weird how Josh "suddenly fell in love with her" because up until now, it seems that he hates her. I don't get it. Did realizing that they're soul mates make him love her or what?

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my princess ending

I think it's so cute that Josh's mark is dark while Anna's is really light. Even with a pounding head, I can still understand what's going on so your writing isn't bad. :) It's not that confusing at all, really.

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my princess ending

You see, this is the kind of story that I would probably read again after I'm done reading it the first time. But then again, this story literally moves at a snail's pace yet so much happens. I don't know how that happens. Ugh.
Speaking of "ugh", I think that word describes Hussein very very well. He's so irritating and forceful, the kind of men I hate, and he doesn't respect his girlfriend. What a hoe.

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my princess ending

I am very tempted to skip to the latter chapters and read a few passages because right now, I sense no romance at all. Don't get me wrong, the story line is great, I just feel as if there won't be a happy ending. You know, with all the neck snapping threats and such.
By the way, I love how you constantly use italics, not for Wolf's dialogue, but for emphasis. It brings more life into the story.

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my princess ending

In all honesty, I have absolutely no idea how I'm going to continue reading this. I hate Josh and I just about never hate the leading male role. I don't know what to do. I hope he turns out to be kind and gentle and not a whore. But isn't that how all stories are? So maybe something unexpected would be nice once in a while.

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my princess ending

It's a nice start. I've been dying to read some supernatural/fantasy lately and I'm glad I saw this on A Drop of Romeo. As cliché as it is to me that Anna would have a friend wolf, I still found it really adorable and exciting. I look forward to reading chapter 2.

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my princess ending

Great writing style!

Gah, was I the only one here who was totally rooting for Hussein and Anna all this time? Pity. It would be too awkward now, and I can see that's not where you're going. Perhaps I'm just biased because one of my dearest friends passed away from leukemia last year. In any case, it's a wonderfully creative story. )

Really enjoying this story, it's so unique and the characters are intriguing. I'm curious as to the relationship between Josh and the protagonist, oh, and the wrist thing ;)

I'm guessing that they are opposites, but one is needed for the other to survive as they balance each other out.

BTW the PDF format of your story is about 560 pages of goodness.

There are so few stories on here that I find truly amazing. I've enjoyed this story so thoroughly.
I have to urge you, go for getting this published. Not once did I feel I knew what the story was going to be. The character development was realistic, and the story 100% original. I've read a lot of books shittier than this.
So yeah, I loved it, and thank you for the wonderful read.

I would just like to say that your story consumed my life. It's magnificent, truly, magnificently written, beautiful plot, characters, deeper meaning, GAH I LOVE IT. Amazing work haha really great. :) I seriously could not put it down, so to speak, until I finished it and when I did there was that huge sense of "... it's over. What is my life now" that you get with great stories

Sorry, I know I said this, but, yeah, it's one of the best story I've ever read.
Any other recommendations of good stories? :-)

one of the best story, thought, I think the ending is pretty sad. I was expecting a happily ever after or something. Though it's completely awesome.

Said awesome for a dozen times, had to find a word to replace it" :-)