Reviews for A damn sweet tale for you
name redacted chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
Love the structure and repetition. Beautiful poem, very dark. Interesting idea about trapping someone's reflection. I just don't get the line "in this fucking liar (fairy) tale." It's saying fairy tales are lies (which makes oddly perfect sense in the context of the poem).
Isca chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
"You're trapped in the mirror forever and ever." There's something incredibly chilling about this line. :)
Generation Dead chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
Wow, I really loved this.

It's very beautiful, in a sad way. I like the idea of being trapped inside a mirror.

Very good job!
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
That gave me the chills! I really liked how it flowed, and the truth comes out. (As in fairy tales are liars)