|Reviews for RG Tales: A Tale of Two Wizards|
| Fractured Illusion chapter 5 . 8/22/2009
"satisfied the way a demonic child watches an ant squirm beneath a magnifying glass on a particularly bright summer day."
Oh geez man XD
"the only thing they actually shared"
Oh please hun! The luv is so obvious XD
Ahaha! The plan made of FAIL is mentioned! Ha! Cant wait to read the inevitable dissapointment later :D
"Shesshy mumbled." Sesshy
"“I got a Wii for Christmas!” Sakura danced up the aisle, squealing and spinning."
*laughs like mad*
It's all so great with the doors and the chapel and all XD (aka, being given surroundings)
"“Well, I’m not violent.” She winked"
So obvious flirting!
I am cracking up all over again due to Bubbles' speech. XD Epicness. Die shito. Haa!
""I’m still stuck on Bubbles and her die shit hoes.” "
"You reap what you sew" sow
Man such an epic Christmas... How can it ever be outdone? D *worried* *needs to plan*
Anyways - nice fic! Aw I had totally forgotten those days. This chapter was the best one :D
Keep it up!
| Nicki BluIs chapter 5 . 8/21/2009
It's beyoteful! I love it! Sigh. Christmas will never be the same. Yay for wiz lurve!
| VelvetyCheerio chapter 5 . 8/20/2009
Huzzah! I was smiling to the very end, what a great end. :D
[“Have a schizophrenic ex that could barge in and shoot everybody?”] Ahahaha! XD You know, I really wish I had been around for this. It just seemed so hilarious...
[“I will amputate both of you permanently if you do not stop sabotaging this marriage!”] Oh, Frac.
[“Give. Me. The. Ring.”] Dayum, getting pretty hasty about it, huh? XD
Oh wow, Sakura... XD I was totally expecting some serious drama to unfold or something.
[“I’m gonna feed him to a mutated koala,”] Oh my. XD
[to nab many virgins, which would cause great annoyance to those who had forced them into marriage.] Heh, I remember those days...
I loved every chapter of it, Radio! Twas the funniest tidbit of RG history I ever wanted to know about! XD
| Chasing Skylines chapter 5 . 8/20/2009
[Radio laughed. “Merry Christmas, RGers. You reap what you sew.”]
[“Oh please, she said.]
Forgot a quotation mark.
The ending made me smile and laugh. :) Also, there was noticeable improvement. It was easy to read through, not stiff, and there was more creative license.
[a platonic marriage of wizards.]
Fuck yes, we lived happily ever after. - goes to periodically ( XD ) rape virgins -
| VelvetyCheerio chapter 4 . 5/29/2009
[Two loud cracks signaled the arrival of Radio and Sesshy to the Vegas OT that Christmas day,] I love how you two can just appear like that, in all your wizardlyness. XD Makes me kinda jealous. ;p
[But it's nice that you want to copy me. It's the most sincere form of flattery.”] D'aw! XD
[“Talking to you brings out the clever in me.”] D'AWW!
[“Splitting virgins is completely platonic.] He says that now.
[“We’re not nerds,” Radio and Sesshy claimed.] Bwahahaha! XD I'm loving this too much.
Hah, you can't fight the law Radio! It had to happen! XD And it is. Update again soon, I want to know what happens and all that jazz. Marriages are always such fun. :D
| Miss Bob chapter 3 . 4/29/2009
Aha! The wizards become Wizards!
Awesome chapter-churning-out-skills, Radio darling!
Write more so that I do not have to backread to get the rest of the story :D
Wait, have I not already faved this?
*sets things right*
As said, write more hun! Love it!
| Left FP chapter 3 . 3/28/2009
I still owe you reviews for the previous chapters. But still...I might as well start with this.
A very enjoyable read.
LOL you actually chasing after Sesshy! (And I think you are right about his age.)
I wasn't around RG when all this took place, so I am living off your accounts of had happened before.
I always wanted to know how you got married...and this is really fun to read.
Sorry I can't point out grammar mistakes and such, since you don't suffer from them, as much as I do. :D
Overall, Radio - it is a nice chapter. Looking forward for more.
P.S. - If you and Sesshy really were wizards...how much nicer life would truly be? *melodramatic sigh*
| VelvetyCheerio chapter 3 . 3/27/2009
Aww, love. XD It started with a flame, which escalated to a book title, and then... :D
["Who are you mooning after?"] Bwahahahahaha! XDD Sentence says it all.
I hate all this talk about age...I don't want to think I'm talking to someone six years younger/older than me, it's not right! D: Let's go with Sesshy's idea of having numbers not apply. :D
Oh, Bubbles and her variations... XD
Aww, before I forget, was Sesshy nervous about the marriage talk? That's too cute. XD Oh, and he backhanded Moddess? O_o I might have to start worshipping him. He is more rebel than...I hate to admit this, but Sesshy might be too cool, even for me. O:
(Don't tell him I said that or you DIE! I will come at you with a chainsaw!)
Love you, Radio. :D
And this story. More for Fang? :D kthnxbai.
| VelvetyCheerio chapter 2 . 3/27/2009
*is amazed* S-Sesshy was a rebel? Like Fang? I won't be able to talk to him the same way again. XD I might have to abolish this pile of his...oh no! Everything I knew about Sesshy, gone.
XD "'my lil emo monster'" wtf? Did Bubbles really think that up? Wow. I'm so glad he did not get that nick. XD He's a monster! XD
Aah! What was with that fight? And uh, Lime's dialogue really confused me. O: Is that how she really talks? I never noticed. :p
Oh well, it was still much in the way of hilarious. XD But man, how in the world am I ever going to look at Sesshy the same way again?
Radio, do you see what you do! jk XD
| VelvetyCheerio chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
Radio! How come I am always so lost on these things? But yayz anyway!
Bwahahaha, Bubbles and her unique language. At first I was like, is Radio experiencing carpal tunnel while trying to write Bubbles' dialogue? XD
Oh, it all started with a flame...and then that flame turned into a raging inferno of love! XD Okay, that is all. Next chapter!
P.S: This isn't going to be a short story, of like, seven or so chapters, right? Cause someone *coughBeatlescough* made me really angry seeing as how their story was too short. But Radio loves Fang and will not have such a short story, right? :D
| Fractured Illusion chapter 3 . 3/27/2009
OMG ew, its the NetxKaras happening D
"“One day Radio is gonna get married in this manor and a beautiful day it will be!”"
And a beautiful day it was :D
Nice foreshadowing haha
"“FYI, I’m a dignified ogler."
lawl XD Yeah keep telling yourself that haha
And aww, Sesshy snapping his fellow wizard out of perverted daydreaming: so cute
The more I read, the more conivnced I am of TEH LURV!
"“hey! no hurtin my menz!” Bubbles declared."
XD You go Bubbles!
"“You heard me, creeper.”"
OMG its so cuu-uu-uute!
"“You’re now my best guy friend! We have much book discussing to do!”"
There needs to be fanart of this scene...
LOVED this chapter. OMG so cute-funny.
The wedding will be awesomesauce
| Fractured Illusion chapter 2 . 3/27/2009
"The room was soon filled with a hoard of dogs with uncontrolled spasms and cows that seemed to fail at mooing to a certain song, eyes staring every way but ahead."
OMG WTF? XD XD XD
I have to say, bubbles is AWESOMESAUCE XD Haha, very bubbly.
And where is my drama, Radio? Everything is like, happy! Who wants happy, except you, you hippie? Not Frac.
I wants the angst and the drama. *nods*
But - HAHA for sesshy in the end.
| Fractured Illusion chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
Frac is here, child, do not worry XD
"Chapter One: Dai’stiho, cousin!"
...Cousins? OMG ew D I have a bad feeling about this you incest-y people!
"“for followers o Reggy, we’re prety awsome flame givers!”"
If the people can touch each other and so forth in the fic, I would suggest spelling things correctly. You don't need to change the words, just spell them properly :P This just makes for an eye sore
“did it mak u cry?”
Lawl Bubbles is so awesome XD
"”Apparently... Frac felt like it.” "
Why does everyone always say it like its a bad thing? :P
"She failed to keep back a giggle at the memory."
Aww if this isn't young wizard love I don't know what is.
Cute start, but I want some drama to happen now :o
| gigglebug chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
I love how you portray Bubbles, lol!
| Chasing Skylines chapter 2 . 3/21/2009
While the descriptions of the war are imaginative and well done enough, they didn't feel as dramatic as it was meant to be; not even over dramatic, just like someone's sitting her and recounting this (which I guess is what's happening, sort of). The 'war' didn't feel very epic or awing. Like, you spent a paragraph or two describing the respective armies themselves, but when it got down to the action, it wasn't really much. I remember not much happening itself in the OT, but creative license, Radio! Not everything has to stick so closely to the facts.
Feux. Heh. It's faux.
Haha, your direct quoting is useful for the dialogue and all.
Such a crappy review. Sorry. My brain's wiped out at the moment.
Update chapter 3 now? ;)