Reviews for Gaming
NocturnalNerd chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
This wasn't what I expected from the title, but I like it. Especially the second stanza, and how it ends, "and get fooled by love". A good line.

"Salty like everything" doesn't make sense, since not everything is salty.

This kind of reminds me of a thing between an old friend and I. I only seemed to like him when he hated me, and vice-versa.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
"Let's pretend we're fool,"... either foolish, fooled or fools

In the third stanza, I thought the last two lines were quite too repetitive. I might gget rid of the last line.

I like this piece. The tone works really well and your descriptions are interesting. I especially love the whole gaming thing.
Isca chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
I liked the first stanza the best; it was striking and flowed well.
lael1bologna chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
Mhm, Nice.
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
I like the verse 1, bad words crack me up! hehe
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
I don’t quite share your view-point, but it is a great poem