Reviews for Ballad
Liebe Dance chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
I really liked the first stanza :)
the meaning of life chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
I really liked it. I loved the whole poem, except I think that ballad was used excessively, but that's the name of the poem, so I'll except it.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
"It's a ballad what you listen?"... First off the whole first stanza is If... so it should be If.. "would you listen to that ballad" Unless that's not what you're saying. I can't tell 'cause the word what doesn't really make sense there.

"with no tear"... tears (Either put a period after this or a comma and don't capitalize So)

I like the ending. I wasn't expecting it. Nice job.
Isca chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
"So, don't cry when you listen." Aww! :)
lael1bologna chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
Beautiful— that's the only word for it
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
Short but beautiful! I loved the way if flowed and it was almost happy. Great poem!
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
And why did you break the last string, when it was only a ballad? Reminds my of rock stars demolishing their guitars at the end of a concert.