Reviews for Quicksand
Elephant-Artist chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
That is a cool piece about quicksand. It made me feel happy. I saw your picture. You look like a nice person. Good job on this poem. Please read and review my stuff.
girl like cheshire chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
gahgah. the first line of the chorus, and stanza three, shoot me through the heart why don't you? :]
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
This isn't your best written piece. However, it's still nice. The quicksand thing is really great and the ending was so relateable. nice job.
Isca chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
"I love you, and it feels like quicksand." Sorrowful!Beautiful! :)
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
I like this. The chorus is perfect. I didn't like the word 'stupid' for some reason, in the 3 verse, but I can't think of a better alternative... helpful, i know :P but anyway, yeah, really liked this!
lael1bologna chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
Wow. This is really nice. I love this update!
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
Sad but i liked it! Its relatable to an extent, beautiful work!
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
Ja, ja, hinterher fragt man sich immer: was habe ich nur an dem Typ gefunden?