|Reviews for To himself|
| Who Is This Girl Anyway chapter 1 . 6/26/2014
You have some excellent imagery in here. My favourite is definitely the final two lines, because that's when the penny really drops. This piece is probably one of the more distinct ones in terms of style, which is another reason I like it; it's a very good showcase for your talent for personification and description. There's not much constructive that I can offer about this since it's a good piece.
| Joseph Knox chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
Hehe, this just makes me happy. Great last line.
| SomeRandomScribbles chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
Love the imagery in this, and the darkness of the story behind it :)
| MJD chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
Still love this. And the last line is still my favorite.
| Generation Dead chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
O, I really like this.
I love how you said "and the gun silently agrees" and I liked "Is the spreading sickness, An emerald fire"