|Reviews for The Finale|
| Who Is This Girl Anyway chapter 1 . 6/26/2014
There's some lovely imagery in here. I noticed a few little clichés here and there, so the only thing I can suggest is to experiment more with vocabulary, but apart from that you're doing well.
| notalonenotalone chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
I love how descriptive your writing is, it makes it more enjoyable to read this and have a sense of whats going on
| MJD chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
I like this one- especially the line "Saltwater tears colliding with the damp rocks".
| sunday night sky chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
Australia? Perhaps? I like the rhythm and pace of this piece; quick and catching, like the content. Very interesting and dramatic. I like it.