Reviews for Seeking Dreams
monkyy109 chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
favorite character: FRED

yup i loved your story

and i like the bus series

jessica's lucky lol

did they marry ON a bus? thatll be cool

and congrats [again] very happy for you i love engagements
toffeecakesxox chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
how adorable. :)

i love it.

...Camden, Camden, i freakin' love that name!

charm en route chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
Still incredibly cutesy, you're great at that.

Also, your characters are great and they all have these great names.

Winning the lottery sounds like funn.
inkybetterdays chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
Aw, this was really cute, I liked it a lot! I love how your stories are all distinctly unique-it's refreshing. :)

In terms of your writing, I continuously spot sentences that are confusing or irrelivant to the story itself. Try to concentrate on keeping the writing solid. No offense or anything. Like I said, I adore your stories! :D
Kendal chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
Very cute. :)
Pinkamoo chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
Oh. So cute ;)

It's nice how he remembers the good thing she did for him. Very nice! I like it! Good work.
Beautifuleyes985 chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
Loved it...your stories are always a delight to read.
entity.unkown chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
sweet :]
manutdmad chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
absolutely adorable and very well written ]

loved it
x3life chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
aw this was so cute! )
EnchantedKorean chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
Very cute! I liked it a lot. Nicely done.
NoieD chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
I'm really enjoying the "Bus" series! Can't wait for more installments!
hiya chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
annoyance chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
Meri Jaan? I like it! ?(I'm Indian XD)
Lily Llynn chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
Still unrealistic, a bit, but more realistic than Backseat Confessions. I liked this better, to tell the truth, though the last line (about them getting married) wasn't exactly necessary. This was very cute and light, and there was just a nice quality about it that I really liked. (: I'm very glad woodstock1969 added this to our c2. (:
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