Reviews for Untouched
Inflomora chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
Wow. This really moved me. Esepescially the "Operatic love song..." part.
Akatsuki Girl chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
That's really deep, Laura-chan. Really, deep. You write well. You should try to sell this poem. Ooh! You could make a teen poetry book! .
Flawless words and it echoes chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
Im glad I read it! Definately has something deep within its walls behind a door. I could open it a little and when I did I shut it immediately because its experience is so depressing. I could feel your words in this poem. It is so beautiful and mesmerizing! Thank you for a treat into the world of creativity. It is still choking me pretty good!
jack0of0spades chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
I liked this, especially your using the image of bricks. For some reason that was really vivid to me. I try to put a piece of critiism in every review, but honestly have none. God job!

-J
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
Ein schönes Gedicht, vor allem der Titel und das „You’ll never know“ am Ende.

Mir gefällt die Variation des Themas mit Sturm, Schrei und Opernarie, das sind schöne, unverbrauchte Bilder.

Ich kenne das: Man leidet und meint, jeder (oder zumindest der Verursacher des Übels) müsste darauf reagieren, aber was passiert? Nix! Alles geht heiter weiter als wäre nichts geschehen.