|Reviews for Not To Be Forgotten|
| MADdreamers chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
This is such a cute story. I liked the whole atmosphere of the bar you created and how you added the bartender's point of view. Great job! Thanks for sharing it.
| ukrgrl chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
it's so sweet! :D
| soxmuchxmorexx3 chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
this is so cutee!
i was kinda saad att he end because t doesn't say if they will see each other again.
hahah but i loved it!
| willsmithlover101 chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
this was really a good story i read your other story "my heart has found its home" i bet you remember me.
| xxchristiexx chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
This was an interesting one shot to read. But I think you could turn it into a full length story if you wanted to. It has the potential to be turned into one, provided you want to or have a sustainable plot to do so. The way you've ended it is good. It stands on its own but to me, it sets the story up for another chapter if you were to continue.
For instance, the man could have been at the bar to take time out of his job, girlfriend or family. And some kind of relationship could develop over time between the man and woman to alter their lives.
But again, that's my opinion. It's your decision. Either way, I hope to read more of your work.
| Izzey chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
that was sweet and fluffy. i liked it, a lot. excellently done