Reviews for Frequency
R. Douglas chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
The imagery of this poem is really vivid. "onion hearts" really caught me.

I do wonder about the lone capitalized My though.

But wonderfully done once again.
ZombieMcQueen chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
the last verse is so powerful, I was damn close to going "aw" out loud. no lie
ForeverBehindTheImpression chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
Very nice. I would suggest capitalizing on the beginning of each line. But if thats your style, go ahead, stick to it :) Who am I to tell you to change? Nice work all the same