|Reviews for Diddy|
| Kate Marshall chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
The first line is pure win. It's probably the best. The rest of the poem wasn't as good to me. But I adore the Tweedle Dee and Tweedle Dum reference. And the "twiddling their thumbs" has a nice alliteration to it. It gives this "diddy" a comedic, poetic feel that I really like.
And the rhymes are nice. They sound fun and clever and not forced. It tied everything in pretty well. You had a nice, steady, set rhythm. ;)
-Katie, from the Review Marathon (link's in the profile!)
| wolfen princess chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
This is kinda random, makes little sense, but I like it. I have on suggestion, putting 'sat on a cherry tree twiddling their thumbs.' on a seperate line.
Otherwise, good. It seems like a slightly twisted version of cute!