I love this story! Its one of my faorites.

Hm... I think he was there. At least I hope so. I liked how you didn't tell us too much, it made me think. Very nice, short and to the point!

Isn't life like that? You think you're over something, and then BAM something like chinese food brings you back! I like the deeper look at Ethan and Ava in their own lives without each other.

Ah! Why would she do that? I feel really bad for Ethan. Hopefully Ava will wise up. Good chapter!

"She wanted to laugh at how easily he could make threats, and how skilled he was at making them to appear otherwise." I hate people liek that! I hope there's a happy ending in here somewhere. I'm starting to not like AVa so much!

Aww Ethan is very sweet. I like them together. I also like how you take parts of your chapter to make the titels.

I like how you don't have too much dialogue. Very focused. Very cute so far.

OH COME ON! Why did you have to end it there! NO! Oh well. All good stories must come to an end. I enjoyed reading this storie. - RoseBriar

OMG! I can't wait to see what happens! DUN DUN DUN! - RoseBriar

Great chapter! Poor Ava though. This sucks. None the less I liked this chapter. - RoseBriar

Uh-oh I don't think that was a good thing! I can't wait to read the rest! Loved this chapter! - RoseBriar

Aw cute chapter! I like how this is going! Loved it! - RoseBriar

I loved it! I think short stories are the best beacuse they are short but sweet and the best part is they don't take long to write! - RoseBriar

(P.S. I only sign with RoseBriar on TOTALLY and COMPLETELY AWESOME stories.)

It's an amazing ending and I love how we have to figure out if he was there or not. I loved it :)

Really enjoyed reading it.

I love your characters!i think this is one of my favorite stories