Reviews for rainstorms
HitchSlap chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
Beautifully written.
sharks don't sleep chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
My favorite bit is "and we talk/about mindmending things and/heartbreaking things" (mostly because I think that sounds perfect).

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Sasami Kowa chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
i love this, the picture it paints is so well great job :)
Unique1952 chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
This is very good and almost lyrical. I really like how you've expressed your emotions on this piece. Nice work wit this piece.