|Reviews for A Part of Grandma|
| Amethyst Asheryn chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
LOL. I love these types of stories, the misleading type. :) Thanks for writing.
One thing I found wrong:
"With lightening-fast speed" - Well, okay, two things. For one, it's actually spelled 'lightning.' For another, you don't need both lightning-fast and speed, I don't think. You could afford to take out the fast ("With lightning speed") or the speed ("Lightning fast, she flung open the door ...")
Other than that, good job.
| collypollyy chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
Finally! A new story! HAH!
I loved this. It made me laugh and think of my childhood thoughts. I still do think toys come alive. HAH! Ok I will stop blabbering about my stupidity.
Its just so funny what goes through a childs mind when they are so naive. Then they think the worst of things.
Anyway, great job! You should write more humerous fictions! (or non fiction for this part!) XD