Reviews for A Part of Grandma
Amethyst Asheryn chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
LOL. I love these types of stories, the misleading type. :) Thanks for writing.

One thing I found wrong:

"With lightening-fast speed" - Well, okay, two things. For one, it's actually spelled 'lightning.' For another, you don't need both lightning-fast and speed, I don't think. You could afford to take out the fast ("With lightning speed") or the speed ("Lightning fast, she flung open the door ...")

Other than that, good job.

Ashe
collycoco chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
Finally! A new story! HAH!

I loved this. It made me laugh and think of my childhood thoughts. I still do think toys come alive. HAH! Ok I will stop blabbering about my stupidity.

Its just so funny what goes through a childs mind when they are so naive. Then they think the worst of things.

Anyway, great job! You should write more humerous fictions! (or non fiction for this part!) XD

Colleen :)