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drops of rain chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
I like it. It's simple.
lookingwest chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
Hahaha! I like this because it's so playful, the words are slanted, almost teasing the reader in a "innocent little girl" fashion that is just really cute and flowery.

I also like this because it's so normal, it's like an actual conversation about something that might have happened and for you to be able to transpose it into a nice little poem shows good skill. The punctuation was great, and the word play was fun. Good job!
Grains and Oats chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
I'm definitely diggin the bold/italics/underline thing going on.

The overall playfulness seems almost like it's hiding something...or I'm crazy. Or both.

Anyways...Good read. _
crazyman12 chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
ooh, i like this one. There's an air of mystery and aloofness in it that makes it very intriguing, and I love it for that. I was a little distracted by the font changes in the first stanza, but I suppose they were there for a reason so I don't think you have to change it. Overall great work!

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