Reviews for Failed
yuanyuan chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
hi !

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broken from the past chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
It's a pretty good poem and I like it.
Thornprick chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
it's sad, a good poem :). :'(
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
I loved the part "Have I failed you now?" It was brilliantly written, and it flows together nicely! D
kage-youkai girl chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
wow. I liked it. Great work.
WhatAboutDolly chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
Well I think it's about a person who's trying to fight their way through life. And the sword symbolizes their heart, which has been through so much strain that it's tired of hurting and trying. I really like this. Good Job (:
ForeverBehindTheImpression chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
Great stuff :) I really do like your poems, I adore the whole right side then in the middley bit. Im sure it has a name, but im not that genius :) Very cool stuff, You keep on writing :)