Reviews for Little Lily of the Valley
pleeeeeeeeeease chapter 10 . 9/14/2014
neeeeeeeerreeeeeeedddddd thiiiiiiiiiiiiis
pleaaaassseeeee chapter 10 . 9/13/2014
neww chapter pleaaaaaaaasssseeeee.i wanna know what will happen :"((((((((
cool chapter 10 . 9/11/2014
please post the new chapter :" wanna see the development .the story is really good by the ans holycon are so 't decide who's better :3
Guest chapter 10 . 11/18/2013
very exciting story! :-) will it get updated?
Xivypeacex chapter 10 . 10/23/2012
Love your story! Update soon please .
Sayure chapter 4 . 5/27/2012
I enjoyed this chapter and Eternity is so cute
Sayure chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
A good idea I like your story, but if only it was M but will this is my first T and I already like the first chapter why not keep it up to the last one? Thank you for it.
firefox vixen chapter 10 . 4/5/2012
phuchess chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
Nice first chapter! I like it!

Alex Rashid

Please review Blossoms. Thanks so much!

(and maybe all my things XD)
Ayumubunni chapter 4 . 10/16/2011
Hehe, I think I'm gonna lie Halcyon ;)
Ayumubunni chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
This looks really good!
anonymous chapter 10 . 9/3/2011
I really like this story alot! But I was wondering something... If Eternity can turn into a female couger, does that mean that he can get pregnant?O.O
Bickazer chapter 4 . 7/16/2011
Ooh, I'm liking the story so far. I think my favorite character may in fact be Adelson. He just seems so interesting and unique, and I love the way he thinks. He's a clueless mad scientist but he really does love his son.

And Halcyon is awesome, too. I'm interested to see how his and Eternity's relationship develops.
juliet lopez chapter 5 . 5/20/2011
hi! I really love your story so much that I just can't stop reading it at all,and I almost really love all the books I read,but yours is the most humorous and giddy one I've read so far!plus,I really do love these kind of genres. Oh, but one thing,you only have the slightest mistakes on your grammar. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story, and letting all your fans,including me,read your undeniably terrific truly left me feeling dazzled.

P.S pretty please,pretty, pretty please,with a cherry on top,make another story like this!
Shay an' Kress chapter 10 . 3/29/2011
OMG please update!

You have to or else I'll DIE!

This is one of my absolute favorite stories on fictionpress!

No, I'm dead serious. It's true. :)


Ohh-kay, I'm a bit pushy (okay, a lot) but it's because this story is to good to not be updated!
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