funny summary: He never expected sexy Halcyon to desire him. No matter how hard Eternity tried to kick him away, he always failed. Either Eternity is a wimp or either Halcyon is just too sexy to resist.

didnt expect that one. Are u having mood swing? lmao. You go suspence to tragic to humor your stories. one thing: What a SHORT chapter, u write more than this usually. Mood swing definately. But ur bottom characters are always so beautiful to imagine. I think I like this Eternity. like i said before, your bottom characters go from mysterious to well abused to mutant! serious mood swing. sorry cant beta u, my English sucks. hope ya continue more

"But in his eyes, men were ugly creatures."

Cough, cough...you sir are out of your F#$%&*G mind! But yes this is very good, I am hooked and a guy that looks like a girl...drool...if only(naughty thoughts)(fans self) cough had to cool off there a second..Write more or I shall send my army of evil kittens after you gr...lol...just kidding(or am I?)

i like the ideas. very interesting. however, get a beta. your grammar is borderline pass. a few added words would really help the flow of your story.

AW! I love it! Please continue! Its sounds so awesome.

Lee

PS: he should have a cat's DNA implanted in him!

mememe! I want to be the first to review! Anyways, this was wonderful! You did a great job of describing Eternity! I think I like him :)

Great work!

Narq.