|Reviews for Forbidden|
| PaigePossum chapter 2 . 10/18/2013
He's married? You probably should've at least made him single
| PaigePossum chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
I thought this is going to quickly especially for the first chapter. You're probably done now but yeah...
| WhoKnows chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
| Aurorazilla chapter 4 . 9/18/2012
lol I love the "That's-what-she-said" reference XD
| Aurorazilla chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
Omg... this is awesome! Most authors on this website (no offense to others) don't include as many descriptive details as you! This is amazing! I can't wait to keep reading! :D 3 3
| Kylie fay chapter 19 . 12/16/2011
| LAH chapter 7 . 11/29/2011
very blatant..when are they gonna get it on?
| Luna at Heart chapter 7 . 11/24/2011
OMFG PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY! :(
| LAH chapter 19 . 10/31/2011
OMG UPDATE! im curious about that courtney..im serious..like how how can you say ur someones bf and yet you cant trust em. Seriously I think courtneyu might ne jealous. but in all honesty, how can she talk to kylie before like they were blood sisters like on the class trip and now shes some backstabbing ho?..ahh well im just jumping to conclusions now arent i ...
| Shitty Ass Writing chapter 19 . 3/28/2011
Wow. Here I was thinking you had actually gotten the point and left but oh no your not that smart. Anywho I just love how you thought changing the title would get rid of me! So funny. You know adding a shitload of detail words to every freaking sentence doesn't make you a good writer right? Just thought I should let ya know. Talk you you later Kelly:)
| Andreussita chapter 19 . 1/8/2011
I think she should not think about Court betraying her, remember that the mind materializes itself, (haha that's my philosophy), so if she doesn't worry about it, nothing will happen;D.
Okay, okay I confess I only want to minimize the situation, but can you blame me?
Anyway great story...
| semperfid3lis chapter 19 . 12/19/2010
good job on the story, more soon please
| 11cina24 chapter 19 . 12/19/2010
After your AN i could tell your writing improved.
I was like, wow, that changed, ahah.
Happened to me when i started on my first story.
Can't wait to see what happens next!
btw, how many chapters do you have in mind as the total story?(:
| LeAnn chapter 19 . 12/10/2010
Ok so I think your writing has definitely improved since the beginning of this story. It happened way too fast and it wasn't believable. You have to make your characters, plot, and relationships believable and that's something you definitely need to work on. Besides that, I really enjoying reading this. Its not the best out there but its entertaining. Please update soon!
| BereRosyln chapter 19 . 12/10/2010
I LOVE UR STORY!