Reviews for What I've Made
broken from the past chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
This is a pretty good poem, and I know what it kind of feels like a little bit.
Isca chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
"I crushed the old rose...laid it down on the dirt." Sorrowful imagery. I also like the question, "Where is my soul?" It was thought-provoking. :)
ForeverBehindTheImpression chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
"Laid it down on the dirt.

The pool of tears I made,

Drains into the soil."

This one, and the verse before, thats just beautiful. I really like this poem. Very beautiful.
Jupiter-Lightning chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
I crushed the old rose,

Let the red weed fade.

Where is my soul?

For some reason, that line really struck me and I like it a lot. Great poem!
Thornprick chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
it's cool, i love it!
strobeXlightXstatic chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
aw. you're very welcome. reviewing your works is actually fun for me. && this one that I'm reviewing as I type is also pretty awesome. It's a different rhyme scheme than most of the poems you write. EXCELLENTE! (oh, Spanish. fancy ;] )
Take Another Look chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
love it :D

just a question, are those specific lines supposed to be underlined or is it just a weird fictionpress thing?

I really like the ending.
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
I liked the verse 1, it was the best part, and I also liked the the last verse, and the last line "Look what I've made." Great poem! D