|Reviews for The Atheist's Crucifix|
| Sakina the Fallen Angel chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
I liked how you expanded on detail, building it up from the bare skeleton of the opening, which could've been set anywhere. Although still vague, you leave a lot for the imagination of your readers, especially with the religious imagery intertwined in what I perceive as forbidden love...
~ Sakina x
| S. M. Saves chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
I can see this piece being written out into a more expanded work. It was good but it seemed kind of "lonely" (so to speak) like it was an exerpt.
It's probably just my problem. Anyway, nice job.