Reviews for HappinessHere I Go Again
S. M. Saves chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
I love how 'Chelle goes from being all powerful and owning the scene in the beginning to a girly-flirt at the pub to getting bitten by karma in the end. It kept me guessing on how I should treat this character. Once I thought I knew who she really was, you'd hand off another piece of her personality, her background, and I was stuck trying to reread her again.

I got a little mess up by the flow. When Ed carries her out, she hops on the bike and leaves but then does she come back later or was that a symbol of when they had been together and she up and left him? That's the only concern I have.

Well done. I'm surprised no one else has given this one a review yet. You probably left everyone speechless. ;)