Wow, this is not a story, it's an analogy within the truth of something. I understand exactly what you're saying, it's sad. Very sad but poignant in description. I know how the puppet feels. Definitely.

Well,have to go right now.

Great job and I can't wait for more of your writing. It's sad and these people should be shot.

Gotta go,

great job. :)

Navaura~

Wow I really really love this story. It's so unique & beautiful. You have great descriptions and GREAT dialouge. Great work

I have just recently posted one completed story and a part of another story I have yet to finish. I would appreciate any honest feedback/suggestions you may have. Opinions from an author like you are always helpful!

Awesome. Your imagery was amazing, with the exception of a few very slightly hazy parts. There were also a few typos / errors (like at one part limp instead of limb), but all in all, I loved it. Very creative.

wow, that was really good. This is an interesting story. It's sad too. I love it!