Reviews for blue and green
Isca chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
"They touch the cold feet of children." Stunning imagery!
marsmarionette chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
Very beautiful and original. Great imagery. As far as editing goes, I would use capital letters. In stanza 2 lines 5 through 8 I would see how it looks italicized. I would leave out the moral at the end, the questions, and redo it so that it is less obvious what you are asking, and thus has a deeper meaning.