This is so sexy and cute, thanks for writing!

Slut and man whore meeting in kimani line...

I have no problem against the characters though. Sure I call her a whore but hey only cause it fits the description. I can read stories with characters who think this way. What I had a problem with was the fact that they fit love in the equation when oh cmon there's absolutely no love there, how the f did that happen. It's just the story of two people who find each other attractive enough to fuck and are trying to get it on and have sexual release. It's not love it's lust. I read it again and again and it still is and only just lust, nothing more nothing less. Just saying. Absurd they fit falling in love and getting your heart with such a completely physical, devoid of any emotion whatsoever, act like a decent lay.

Skirt that would flash her knickers when she bends over? Nope hun you're not a bitch, just a grade a whore. There is actually a huge difference from being confident and meeting your "needs" than being plain trashy and throwing yourself to a hot guy, going up to him in skank clothes, then indirectly insinuate about giving him a blowjob as your intro, grind up to him and practically hump him on the dance floor, and then have a wild fuck after. And most of that happened in the span of a few minutes had she not been interrupted the first time. And after reading the sex bit, nope girl that isn't love it's just your lust and probably your vagina giving you ideas you read too much into when all its actually telling you is that it wants the big D. Seriously a lot of people are confusing love and lust, making love, sex and a plain fuck, and being classy to being downright trashy. Gosh they don't even know what class means anymore, get a dictionary people and read books for everyone's sake and hopefully for yours as well. Wouldn't have been so turned off by this if the writer didn't try to romanticise such a horny girl feeling lust and a horny guy looking for an easy lay or a quick fuck. Their conversations were mere facts and having the same likes doesn't make you soulmates just better fuck buddies. #REALITY

not that great, but a nice read

Cheeeeesy and funny haha!

goood

Woah! That was really good _ but I'm sorry to hear about that whole incident with your story... Anyways I think that it would be great if you made more chapters with this!

I think this is quite clever, and your use of induendoes was nice.

I can't believe someone would try to take credit of your work, I guess they did it because your work was so AWESOME. All I want to say is this is such a cute oneshot. All those pickup lines and innuendos were hilarious. It was very very hot. :)

Oh wow, "child who is cool" or whatever DID plagiarize! I'm so sorry! You did a wonderful job! :)

it was a really good story sex scene a bit toooo graphic nd somebody totally copied word for word on its called love at first f**k in the danny phantom catagory... i cant believe people do that but any way really gud story nd rite another chapter please...!

wait, why are you dead? haha nice pickup lines ! i love them

that was a nice story

love how it goes

actually, it was one of the m-rated stories that i liked !

hoping to read something from you someday ! :)

'Nice one.! HEHE! :)