This is REALLY good! Did you write this? If you did, i think that it's great.

this poem so cool!

ooh, really pretty! Really like the line "your fairytale of unrealistic happenings". That just really hit me as uberWONDERFUL :D

"Probe my heart:

and Take it:

but don’t deceive me,

In saying you love me."

Creative ideas! I loved this! Keep it up! D