|Reviews for No More|
| Brenda Agaro chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
I like the flow of this. The only things are the lack of punctuation (should there be a period after "when I'm losing"?) and I find "ice cold knife" to be overused - I can suggest a stronger word choice/imagery if you want.
| Snowflakes Are Drifting chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
| Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
"How would you see the
carving inside my heart"