Reviews for broken walls
Isca chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
I loved the comedic tone in the final stanza. :)
012323232 chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
the wall seems more figurate and poetic with your mother, while with your father, it is plausible as something literal and real.
softersin chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
wow. what a way to think about it.

lovely.