I still love it! However, they're moving sort of fas, relationship-wise -mating or not- in my opinion. Change it. Don't change it. It's fine either way. :)

Your words had me from the start! I love it. There is little to correct, grammatically, in punctuation and with spelling, so your doing great!

This is a really nice story. Please write more chapters, I'm very interested in this.

next time im editing it 1st

don't call me pup! my favorite line... :)

i love matt! but you already know this... its lovely, it seems a little fast but still good :)

uh how did he know?

cool chap...cnt wait for more..)