Reviews for As The World Falls Down |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hopefully this story isn't dead yet since it hasn't been updated for a while.. Anyway I really like the story |
![]() ![]() Meant please update! srry |
![]() ![]() Please review! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh snap! I wonder how June will react. Great update looking forward to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() welcome back! |
![]() ![]() I happened to just browse through all my favorites when I did a double take when I saw this had been updated! For what it's worth, I really enjoyed this story and I am sorry you lost inspiration... Nevertheless I am glad you put the chapter up anyway! Still think this so one of the best kidnap stories I have come across... |
![]() ![]() I am glad you are back! I really like this story so I hope you decide to update soon! I want to know what is in store for June! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you do find the inspiration to continue this story. I absolutely love it. So Eric had had eyes on June for one and a half years? Wow. I am really interested in reading more about what June's father had to do with Eric. I am also really starting to like Lobo's character. I can't wait to see more of him. I hope you continue with this story and update soon. It'd be a shame to let go of such a gem. C: |
![]() ![]() OH My GOodness! LAST person I expected to be Lobo...Plot twist! Hopefully he can help get J back... |
![]() ![]() ![]() The plot thickens. The story has been enjoyable thus far; I am enjoying the character interactions, and they seem to be acting their age (easier said than done). June seems to be doing rather well for a kidnapping victim, being headstrong and whatnot, though I feel like Eric is impassive for someone obsessed with her - but perhaps that is an ideal trait for an assassin. Looking forward to an update! |
![]() ![]() I hope you update soon! I really like it so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just realized how much time has passed since I logged in and looked at this (or anything on fp for that matter), but I'm glad I found your work again! You've updated! :-) I know its been a while since you last updated but I'm glad you've continued on. I'm really looking forward to seeing what Eric has planned. Keep on writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is crazy and I love it! I look forward to eventually reading more of what I have dubbed my new found obsession. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good, please continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god! U stopped writing here?! How could u?! Lol ahhhhhhhhhhh so many questions! Plz continue! |