Reviews for Clever Rhetorical Excursions
Lilja Ruusu chapter 11 . 3/10/2009
I liked the part "I'll burn your house," because it was very...angsty/romantic-ish! Like, you'd stand up for the girl because you love her or something...I don't know, I'm probably wrong, but that's what I got from it. Oh well, it was very well written! D
Lilja Ruusu chapter 9 . 3/10/2009
This was sad but beautiful. I loved it
Lilja Ruusu chapter 7 . 3/10/2009
This one made me laugh incredibly hard! That last line cracked me up. D
Lilja Ruusu chapter 6 . 3/10/2009
This one was pretty good too. D
Lilja Ruusu chapter 5 . 3/10/2009
"Why are we, the way we are,"

Powerful line, I loved it!
Lilja Ruusu chapter 4 . 3/10/2009
I liked the rhyme, and my favorite lines were:

"Far too many lifes at stake,

To have any mistakes.."
Lilja Ruusu chapter 3 . 3/10/2009
"Trust me,

Just lend me your heart,

But you're too far apart,

So you'll never believe that."

I loved that part, which I took to be the chorus. Correct me if I'm wrong. That was a great song, though, I could actually put a tune to it in my head.
Lilja Ruusu chapter 2 . 3/10/2009
"My life is crap,

It's just a mishap" made me laugh. Anyway, good song.
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
I liked it! It was very true, and I loved the title! D