Reviews for Within the Depths of My Hell
donxcat chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
well writen.. sort of an unhappy story but you did a very good job with it. I really like your creative poetry better.
destinee's notebook chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
This was written quite well, very descriptive.

One thing that caught my eye and caused a little 'hitch' in my reading flow was stumbling across one of the last sentences, though. "...mimics you’re action..." should be 'your' instead of 'you're'.

Good job. :]

- Des