Whaaaat where's the rest:((((

Its not showing ch.2 on wordpress

I love this story soo much! I can not wait for more haha

So, now to go to FB...

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Cara

You. Tease.

You know I'd follow Dev to the edge of the earth and back. I am such a slore.

:)

I LOVE YOUR STORY! Please update ASAP!

I really really do enjoy this story. I do hope that you will update this soon! I like how this is about law investigation, I think that is truly an interesting subject and plot. I like how we see in the beginning about the amount of hate that each of them have for each other. As time goes on, they end up caring about each other. I like how the perspectives do kind of change between the two characters. We get to see what the other one is thinking about. I have the guy that tried to rape her. I think it is messed up to rape someone. Consent is sexy. Hopefully you update soon. I would love to see what will come soon.

the summary sounds interesting so i added ur story to my alert list.

will read and review after its finished.

can you please finish this story? i've been waiting on this since FOREVER! please :)

Soooooo good! Update soon please!

hi, LOVE THIS .

this is amazing.

their relationship is so...REAL. and i'm in love with him.

Marvell is disgusting.

I love the whole acting thing though. and the sexy dresses. heh. (:

update soon!

he is not going to act like a idiot and sleep with some other girl is he

Sweet. I didn't see any major errors. Looks like it's a good wrap up to the last scene.

That chapter was beautiful. I can't even describe it... it was probably one of the most perfectly-written scenes that I have read in a long time. It was emotional and realistic because of what had happened, and honestly... it completely hooked me in. I'm in love with this story.

The characters, the plotline and the writing is all incredible. It all flows perfectly, and in that latest chapter everything fell into place. Rachel makes sense to me now, as does Devon and them both as a couple. I can see why they fit, and you did that all in one chapter.

Your writing is just amazing. I wish I could say more but I'm incredibly tired right now, so I'll leave it at the fact that I don't think you've done anything wrong or that anything could be improved drastically in this story. Everything about it is beautiful, amusing and enthralling, so keep up the good work and I'll be patiently waiting for more. (:

You're a wonderful writer!

LOVED IT!

I absolutely love your story. The plot is original, the characters are well developed, and the romance between Rachel and Devon doesn't overpower the story. This chapter is my favorite so far becuase we finally get to see Rachel and Devon together, but not in the way that I would've suspected. It's also nice to see Devon's worry for Rachel and how he wants to make her feel better after her incident with Marvell (who deserves to die). I love how you said that Devon could see fear, vulnerability, and other emotions in her green eyes. Those two make a beautiful couple. I'm going to call them Rachon. I just hole Rachel doesn't regret anything in the morning.

Wow. This is a long review. Thanks for reading it though. Update Soon! I can't wait for the next chapter.

-TheElements23