Reviews for The Step brother
Dahlie chapter 2 . 3/15/2009
I just gotta say,

i love...naw...adore this story.

woah.

just please keep writing, im begging on my knees, if u want me

the idea of the story ist just that hot, and i already love trevor

just please, write more xD

and dont u ever think of not finishing the story, yeah?

:)

kisses
Julia Nathan chapter 2 . 3/15/2009
Ha Ben and Jerry!

Okay I'm a bit confused of who's who so could you tell m the stepbrothers and there ages again? Bill is her father right? Good job! :)
she-who-will-not-be-named chapter 2 . 3/15/2009
i think that the idea for this story is really good.

its cool so far, maybe a little fast but it seems like it could be realy good :]

keep going. ;]
I Murder on Impulse chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
Aww...great story! Keep updating !

xx
Izzey chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
i personally would love to see it continued, but it's up to you in the end.
Michelle chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
I loved it .

HAHA,

SOrry .

GIMME BACK THAT FILET-Oh FISh!

HAHA .

Loved it.

HAHA,

UDPATE SOON [:
randomxash chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
ohh, i love it. it's amazing.

continue:)
hellosunshinee chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
I really like the idea :) i think it could be a good story.
Averybarbarian chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
I think it is quite interesting... Good character development and discription is nice too. I think you should keep writing I've very much enjoyed this chapter. ) Well done!
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