Reviews for Litter Bug |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Haha brilliant. Good girl. Made him still throw them out. I like this very much; it was tres cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol. i love this series. it's so unique. gosh, i didn't think so much could happen on a bus! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wonderful. loved it. it's light and fun. fantastic job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() My favorite in the Bus series, so far! I'm interested in seeing what your future inspiration is going to look like! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha so cute! xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love your bus series thing theyre so awesome! i think this is my favorite soo far... cuz you only had two soo yeah lols :D i love reena's character shes so fun and i like all of them lols i like ted and oreo ice cream cookies OWN ASS lols cookies and cream ice cream is the best tho and i hope you continue your wonderful oneshots |
![]() ![]() ![]() so cute! love it. :) -toffeecakesxox. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww this is sweet. i love it ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was really sweet, I really liked that he wrote her a note in the paper that he threw at her! I'm really liking reading your 'Bus Series' they are all really good:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so adorable! I had this huge smile on my face the entire time. The paper throwing, the characters, the plot, all of it was just soo much fun to read. You did a great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heloo, this was insanely cute, oh, definitely. [: Although I found a couple of mistakes: "her smile as she saw and headed them." should say 'headed towards them' or something to that extent "like a stupid teenage talking to his crush" probably should be 'teenager' '"just about Reena's hand." and here I think you meant 'just above' or 'about where Reena's hand was', something like that. Anyway, great job. |