Reviews for Litter Bug
Pinkamoo chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
Haha brilliant. Good girl. Made him still throw them out.

I like this very much; it was tres cute!
slee5133 chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
lol. i love this series. it's so unique. gosh, i didn't think so much could happen on a bus!
Izzey chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
wonderful. loved it. it's light and fun. fantastic job!
NoieD chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
My favorite in the Bus series, so far! I'm interested in seeing what your future inspiration is going to look like!
I Murder on Impulse chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
Hahaha so cute!

xx
monkyy109 chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
i love your bus series thing

theyre so awesome!

i think this is my favorite soo far...

cuz you only had two soo yeah lols :D

i love reena's character shes so fun

and i like all of them lols i like ted

and oreo ice cream cookies OWN ASS lols

cookies and cream ice cream is the best tho

and i hope you continue your wonderful oneshots
toffeecakesxox chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
so cute! love it. :)

-toffeecakesxox.
cheleigh chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
aww this is sweet. i love it )
amezz chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
That was really sweet, I really liked that he wrote her a note in the paper that he threw at her! I'm really liking reading your 'Bus Series' they are all really good:)
blurrylights chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
That was so adorable! I had this huge smile on my face the entire time. The paper throwing, the characters, the plot, all of it was just soo much fun to read. You did a great job!
charm en route chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
Heloo, this was insanely cute, oh, definitely. [:

Although I found a couple of mistakes:

"her smile as she saw and headed them." should say 'headed towards them' or something to that extent

"like a stupid teenage talking to his crush" probably should be 'teenager'

'"just about Reena's hand." and here I think you meant 'just above' or 'about where Reena's hand was', something like that.

Anyway, great job.
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