Haha brilliant. Good girl. Made him still throw them out.

I like this very much; it was tres cute!

lol. i love this series. it's so unique. gosh, i didn't think so much could happen on a bus!

wonderful. loved it. it's light and fun. fantastic job!

My favorite in the Bus series, so far! I'm interested in seeing what your future inspiration is going to look like!

Hahaha so cute!

xx

i love your bus series thing

theyre so awesome!

i think this is my favorite soo far...

cuz you only had two soo yeah lols :D

i love reena's character shes so fun

and i like all of them lols i like ted

and oreo ice cream cookies OWN ASS lols

cookies and cream ice cream is the best tho

and i hope you continue your wonderful oneshots

so cute! love it. :)

-toffeecakesxox.

aww this is sweet. i love it )

That was really sweet, I really liked that he wrote her a note in the paper that he threw at her! I'm really liking reading your 'Bus Series' they are all really good:)

That was so adorable! I had this huge smile on my face the entire time. The paper throwing, the characters, the plot, all of it was just soo much fun to read. You did a great job!

Heloo, this was insanely cute, oh, definitely. [:

Although I found a couple of mistakes:

"her smile as she saw and headed them." should say 'headed towards them' or something to that extent

"like a stupid teenage talking to his crush" probably should be 'teenager'

'"just about Reena's hand." and here I think you meant 'just above' or 'about where Reena's hand was', something like that.

Anyway, great job.