Reviews for Relative Control
Isca chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
"He of the ever-colour eyes." Alice Sleeps, your writing is perfect here! :)

"He called her jagged, once." There's something so beautiful and sad about this line.

Your writing is always amazing!

-Isca
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 3/12/2009
Mostly, it flowed well and I liked how, even though there wasn't much rhyme, it got a great point across. Good poem, well written. :)