|Reviews for The Pipe Room|
| tangledwebweweave chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
It got very good as I read it later on...the beginning is the hardest to write, I know it. And now I really want to know what the heck was going on in there!
Very nice job with the imagery, questions, vocabulary, and descriptions. Unique story.
| Dreemun chapter 1 . 3/12/2009
Ah, so *this* is the one... OK!
I hadn't understood the contest was about an original fiction.
Geez, it's true you can hear some pipe-like resonances in this theme. And those voices...
Isn't it strange how pleas for help are a major example of scary things? How they seem to be dangerous in themselves, to our minds? (And by the way, very consistent with Saavy himself, scary though needing help)
I love the idea of having the first whimper associated to an echo of the main character's own voice... like an omen of his possible future.
Good job, and from you how could I be surprised? X)