Reviews for Love Without a Title
ForeverBehindTheImpression chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
"It escapes in a whirlwind of nothing

Like blood that cannot clot

A broken dam

Flowing straight for you

Destined to change you"


"Melodies fall short

Dedications lose their luster

Due to my ignorance, incognizance,

Just a deeper wondering..."

were some of my favourite bits, but really I loved the whole thing, so it was hard to decide. The twist on the end was great, theres something about the way that its written thats jusyt like, Wow, that was really good!

Keep it up! :)
HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
Wow, that was beautiful. i want to say that a part of this was my favourite, but all of it was! I love this poem! Keep on writing! I absolutely loved the ending. Perfect finish