Reviews for Firestarters
Isca chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
"Blistered leaves." Striking description. The poor leaves!

"Your bones gleamed." There's something so beautiful, yet chilling, about this imagery.

"A river of sorrow." AMAZING!

"We're just ash now." Heart-breaking!

Another great piece,

-Isca
from beneath the bell jar chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
So um yeah...this pretty much kicked ass. Adds a whole new level to teen misconduct. Clever mastery of words throughout the whole thing. 2nd and 3rd stanzas were my favorite - haunting imagery. Especially in the 3rd one. Also liked the seeming tongue-cheek wording of "reversed hellos". I liked the general slight cryptic nature in the piece. Nothing is spelled out and I like that. Favorite line: "blink unstated promises away like stray bullets, right on target". Great piece.
Morgan Duriya chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
As always I love your use of language. Brilliant!