Reviews for The Heir of Azurna
strobeXlightXstatic chapter 5 . 3/13/2009
okay, so, in the fourth chapter, a few more of the 'your' should be 'you're' && 'his' should be 'he's' &&, for further reference, it is against the rules to say 'alright' in literature. it has to be 'all right'. I don't know why, but it is. I love Torican! He is great! Another success for lael!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
i need to know what will happen next i like it no ilove it i need more
strobeXlightXstatic chapter 4 . 3/12/2009
Okay. New chapter is excellent excpet for a couple o' minor errors. A few times you put 'his' instead of "he's" && 'bit' instead of 'bite'. Other than that, job well done.
strobeXlightXstatic chapter 3 . 3/11/2009
okay... *shudders with delight* A few grammatical/spelling errors: a few places say 'your' when it should be 'you're'. Also, in chapter 3, the text && dialogue is a bit bunched together, but that could just be FP madness. Other than that, I haven't noticed anything but brilliance && extremely creative names. YAY ATHRON!