|Reviews for ruined|
| Peachesandcream15 chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
This is good, I liked the last line "Please say you'll remember that I ruined this."
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
I like the long lines. I think it adds to the strong, emotional tone of it. The speaker isn't hesitating to say what there is to be said, and it strikes me as a very honest, regretful, bittersweet piece. Nice.