Reviews for Apple of Discord
Scarlett Smile chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
The title is what initially drew me in because it is a creative title. However, your words are very angst-ridden and I like that at the end you put "so thank you for makin' my life so interesting", that's some added spice that I really liked to this poem :)
Emylie Giovanna Graivs chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
This is amazingly how I feel right now, your words hit right where I'm sure you meant them to. Very Nicely Done.
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
I liked this I liked how you talked about there life being predictable. And the line, "I know what road to take though I don't get far." Amazing. Good work
Living Life Free chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
This has happens to me before. I hate it when others talk shit too! Great poem.
Elizabeth Alan chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
Your fury is almost contagious!
Isca chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
It's ridiculous how people have nothing better to do than to make fun of others. Ignore them. They're not worth your time. :)

"The Apple of Discord." Brilliant line!
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 3/12/2009
"'cause my life isn't too circus

to entertain you and all your people."

great lines, I really liked all of it. Even the bad words made it interesting!
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 3/12/2009
du sagst es selbst: ein schönes Gedicht!

Wie geht es dir und deinem Vater?