Reviews for Marrying the 'Vitch'
Celena Black chapter 9 . 5/17/2011
Christ i think i've fractured a rib! this was frekking hilarious! Love love all your characters, the whole story and her mum is like my new idol...ino ino i'm being mega smarmy and not very constructive in my criticism but its one in the morning been reading your story for like 5 and a half hours straight so i'm sure you can find it deep within to forgive me.

Fantastic! Publish this and give us all the release date and the publisher, crazy, crazy but irrresistable - sp? - totally charmed by all your characters!

hoping for more in the near future...very near future if possible,

all the best, your new and adoring fan

Kamui
Hannah Medwid chapter 9 . 5/17/2011
Hi Deena,

I absolutely. Love. This. Story. You must be some sort of literary genius... Each character is portrayed so well, and each has their own individual vibrancy. Navleen is quirky and funny, and I love how she's not some stereotypical white high school girl. Luca oozes (Italian?) sexiness, and the two of them together are hilarious, completely compatible, and destined to be together (not just becuase an old woman says so...) The chemistry between them is so life-like, its unreal, and I just absolutely cannot get enough of them. My only suggestion? Write the next damn chapter;) (although I dont want to rush history in the making..) I love love love it and cant wait to hear more!

Hannah
Moona chapter 9 . 5/16/2011
I'm Pakistani myself and this fic makes me laugh. You characterize Desi people so perfectly, OMG. Seriously, Navleens Auntie like defines my Aunt and my mom is kinda like her mom except not as chill.

I do love the story line and find it genuinely funny however you need to add more character to Naveleen and Lucan. They seem very two dimensional and a little like Mary Sues. Naveleen never has any worries and seems so positive about everything. She's so cool but not someone you can relate to. The story line is great , make no mistake but add some insecurities and actual human flaws not Mary sue flaws. Can't wait for any updates.
vmursili chapter 7 . 5/11/2011
Hey,

I know you're busy, what with all the nursing studies and all. (I think being a nurse is kinda cool :) )

But please update?

I love this story and I wanna read more!

Please try to update soon?
please update chapter 9 . 4/29/2011
Please update son!

I'm sure that you are very busy but please try to update soon. This story is so amazing.
Cee.wat.i.live.for chapter 9 . 4/26/2011
Wow this story is amazing so far. I really love all your characters. They are all developed so well and they all have their own personality: they are all unique and very interesting! I love the story line so far and the relationship between Lucan and his Cookie lol. I can't wait for another chapter
Draupadi chapter 9 . 4/16/2011
Deena,

This is an absolutely riveting story. The main character, Navleen, is hilarious, adorable, and lovable. Lucas is absolutely delicious. And your writing style is fast paced and witty.

Keep up the good work!
drats chapter 9 . 4/10/2011
aww. there's no more. :(

I was really wanting to see Janie soonish too.

Love the story. It's awesome.

Especially Navleen's character when drunk. It actually reminds me alot of Janie, only without the science, among other things.

Anyway good job. Loving it. But Please, pretty please update soonish. Or if you're not even writing the next chapter. Please do.

Just don't give up on the story or I, along with everyone, will be very sad.
Sheepthief chapter 9 . 4/6/2011
I reread this story literally every 3 weeks because it's so awesome and every single time I hope that there's the next chapter but there isn't... Please don't keep me waiting any longer I love this story (and "Hiring a Hooligan" too, obviously)
Ivix chapter 9 . 3/25/2011
haha The story is really good :)
paperstack chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
I love your style! Hopped over here right after finishing Hiring a Hooligan. This chapter was great in so many ways; I loved the description of a place I haven't yet had the chance to visit! And as always, love your offbeat humour! :)
Captcha00 chapter 9 . 3/23/2011
The characters seem so real and their personalities are all so unique and engaging, I really can't wait to read more!

'Specially if oozing is involved- Lucan sounds like a hottie ;)
OMGGGGG chapter 9 . 3/19/2011
THIS IS AMAZING I LOVE IT UPDATE SOON PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
sweetdamaged chapter 9 . 3/15/2011
Please, please, PLEASE update! LOVE this story! :D
bobbtte923 chapter 9 . 3/11/2011
please update son :):)
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