I love this story so much. I really like your character Navleen, and how her and Lucan interact. thanks for such a great story!

i love coming up with explanations of our different indian things especially dosa. thats a fun one to explain or even kachori

Please please please update.

I have been checking this story for an update since September!

I live this story and am excited for the next chapter...

please update this story T.T ...

Please update as soon as possible! Awesome story by the way!

Ahh you really need to update this! I love this story so much. Navleen's mother reminds me of mine, but mine is Chinese :) Hehe!

Oh my fucking god ! I'm not fond of swearing, but hell, i love your style. Janie's and Rafe's story was already one of my favorites, but I think I'm liking Lucan and Navleen even more. Must be because Navleen is nearer to me in age and even if Janie was funnily oblivious, Navlen's mind is hilarious. And now that I think about it, her mum awsomeness is equal to Janies' grandmother.

Well, in short, that means of course that this story is going straight to my favorites and that I'll surely reread these nine chapters while I wait for the tenth one.

Seriously, keep going with this one, as soon as your study and your life let you have the time.

Hugs and kisses for these excellent few hours I just spend on my computer.

Oh wow! This fic is awesome!

I hardly ever read het (my favourites is a testiment to that ;P), but for a few special fics my horizons expand!

There is such few fics that aren't , and I think the dash of other cultures is really refreshing. And ofc, and absolute hoot!

I adore Navleen's mother and I think the complete opposites of Navleen and Lucan.

I hope you update this real soon! It would be such a shame for it to be left half-done...

Update real soon!

MOARNAO

plzkthnxbai

Would it be pathetic if I begged you to update? 'Cause I'm almost there honestly!

This story is awesome! I read HAH and absolutely loved it, and completely forgot that Lucan was related to HAH at all, so I'm happy that I've read this story. Oh, thanks so much for sharing! Can't wait for the next chapter!

-Rei.

My god, your story is so funny! I kept on making all these weird squeaking noises that pass for a laugh for me. I really thought my friend was going to ship me back to the asylum. Believe it or not, I am not one to laugh a lot, so many people are not used to my customary, crazy laugh. Oh well, it could be worse. Keep up the good writing!

I have one thing to say: waffle cones are truly the best invention of the 21st century-wait, were they invented in the 21st century? Well if they weren't they're the best invention in the history of Earth! Yes, I know your probably thinking I'm insane and incredibly random-for the first: well duh! Look at my screen name-it's not like I'm going to be the most rational of people. For the second, just call it a quirk of my personality. Besides, my comment is not entirely out of hand; you did mention my favoritest food in the whole wide world. Wow! I just spent all that space explaining my insaneness to you! The even more amazing thing is that I'm surprised. If your worried about your fanfic attracting insane people, don't worry; I am probably the only insane person obsessed with fictionpress. All is well! Keep up the good work. Sorry if I freaked you out; I tend to have that effect on people.

That was one effing long chapter. God thank you, you blessed soul. You don't know how long I've been reading paragraph long fanfics. But, my God if she doesn't take that guy I will-you know, if he existed. Math professor, huh? Doesn't really mix, you know? But it's totally hot at the same time and oh my gosh I'm such a sucker for tattoos! Hell yes, I would like to see them. I don't really have any constructive criticism, but believe it or not I'm OCD so I'll eventually have some. Just ignore it, that's what everyone else does. The story's pretty dang good so far. Keep it up!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update this. SOON.

Please update! I love your stories. They are wonderfully "quippy" and intelligently written. I love the mathematical jargon. So please write more, you wonderful author you!