I'm really impressed. Being brown myself I never knew a brown character could be so interesting. Navleen is definitely special. I dont think I've ever met a brown girl like her. You're other brownies are unique as well and have managed to inspire me to write something with a brown girl as a main character. It'll take some time since I'm real lazy but I shall eventually. Dont be a lazy arse like me! Update ASAP alright?
-Patiently waiting, R.R

Wow, incredibly well written, though "Jesus shit" was super offensive.

You are an evil being! You stopped right before the sex! What cruelty!

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE your stories! Please tell me that you're not going to leave them unfinished. Please update soon. ESPECIALLY this chapter! haha

ooh la la! what WOULD your mother say?

As I said on Facebook, we need more sexy tattooed studs around, no? I adore this story to pieces and really hope you get back to writing more of it. Navleen and Lucan are so freaking cute and Navleen's mum is SO awesome!

I think this is the fourth time I've read this. :P Keep it up, I love your writing!

- Maya

Haha, I love how in the glossary list you included Timbits amongst all the Hindi [it IS Hindi, right?] for the non-Canadian folks.

This story, especially the dialogue, is so clever. The cultural stuff is super great. And you drop all these references to Canadian icons, totally like Canadian inside jokes. Love love love. Keep writing!

Oh no, is this abandoned? I hope not! I love your story, and I hope you'll be able to continue it soon :)

please update! i just re-read this ! please pelase please please! :)

hi! this is the first time i've reviewed on this story and i have to say, i love it! reason no. 1: ican relate to this story so so much. (cause i'm indian too hi 5 sister!) you've really captured the very essence of the indian family. your story has the most ethnically diverse characters i've seen in a long long long time. reason 2) i used to hate lucan cause i thought he was a bit shifty in HAH. i mean, hello? hitting on your brother's potential girl? *creeper alert* but now i love him cause he's really nice. and i loved the awkwardness when lucan came over to navleen's for dinner. i laughed so hard!so i notice you haven't been updating a lot, so what i wanted to ask is, when will you be updating regularly again?

I love this story! I love the culture and the fact that it crosses over with your other story (which I read first). Lucan was my favorite character then and is even more so now! Navleen is an awesome character, and your writing style is very well developed. The pace and vivid diction make for an excellent combination as well. Thank you for writing this wonderful story, and I can't wait for the next chapter. I know you haven't updated in a very long time, but I hope you consider coming back to this one day. Thank you.

Good lord! That was freakin awesome I haven't laughed out loud like this in a long time! Why aren't you publishing stuff?

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Where'd you go?

Speaking as a Filipino, you have no idea how deliriously happy seeing "Putang ina mo!" made me. :D

Omg I love this story please update!