Reviews for Immobile and Incompetent
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
Oh, this is beautiful. My goodness. A few of my favorite parts: "bones and noises tiled all across the waves," "divorcing them from slits in the fabric/until they scream at me for it," and "in skin the shade of grapefruit seed." Oh, it's just so vivid and pretty. I love it. Keep writing! :)
Isca chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
"And perhaps if you stay you’ll find something a little sweeter than a handmade hell." MIND-BLOWING! :D