Reviews for Paralytic Apathy
Iris Crix chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
May I ask why you must be so very chast in the sence of suffering? We all do suffer at the mercy of the ignorant and closed minded...
Isca chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
"Pregnant silences miscarry." Jesus. Brilliant metaphor.

"Rat-a-tat-a-tick-tock hands." This reminded me of scat. Very creative. :)

"And Caroline, I miss you every day." The sadness and humanity in this line is very striking and beautiful.