|Reviews for The Memory Eater's Daughter|
| Elber of Torou chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
I think that this was very well written. Ok, there were a few minor spelling/grammar errors (ie 'head' instead of 'heard'), but they were largely beside the point. This idea is well-constructed, and has a deep and intriguing plot. I like how the main characters are never described, even though they fit in with humans-it allows them to have some kind of other-worldly appearance in the mind's eye... I ramble.
The idea of the deep, dark place in all our minds, I particularly like that. It is interesting, something non-human trying to understand us incomprehensible and utterly weird beings.
Kudos all round. Fix up those few, minor errors, and this could easily be published.
| SapphireIris chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
I can definitely say that this is one of those stories that I will remember for a long, long time. It's just so original, so poignant and different from anything else I've read. I love it!